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"Cognitive Transformation" by Ben Tolman (2004), as featured in Wonderbook by Jeff Vandermeer.
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Become a Benevolent Liar: Write What You DON'T Know

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft "Cognitive Transformation" by Ben Tolman (2004), as featured in Wonderbook by Jeff Vandermeer. I’ve been reading a wonderful book and it’s called Wonderbook (nail on the head with that one) by Jeff Vandermeer. It’s a glossy tome about writing fiction that’s brimming with illustrations and odd ends that are unlocking parts of my brain typical writing craft books don’t touch—much less tickle. So of course I had to share it with you!...

A sign outside a tent indicates Indie Author Alley at Columbus Book Festival

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft Writers often enjoy the anonymity of being behind a story. It provides a certain amount of camouflage. It’s not about you, it’s about the story. But when I attended the recent Columbus Book Festival, one of my greatest joys was to see and hear authors talk about their books, perspectives, and experiences. I found myself scrounging for every personal detail that would connect the dots between writer and writing: One author wrote...

A blackberry bush in my garden

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft Against the better judgment of my inner voice, I may have implied I’m a serial killer to the new neighbor that just moved in next door. And that I bury the corpses in my garden beds. Let me back up. I’ve been experimenting with a new (to me) approach to fostering creativity inspired by reading James Vanderbeek’s Wonderbook: If you reward your imagination by writing down your ideas and exploring them, even the slightest little...

A woman typing on her laptop to revise a fiction manuscript

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft Beginnings of novels get a lot of attention, and for good reason. They set the tone and expectations for the whole book, and they’re how readers decide if they’ll keep reading… or stop after chapter one. No pressure. Hook readers from page one Within the first line, page, chapter, and fifth of the book, you are aiming to accomplish a few things: Capture the reader Foster empathy for the main character Establish stakes Promise...

A women with brown curly hair reads a book

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft Ever picked up a book that felt… flat? You’re watching the characters move, hearing what they say—but somehow, you’re not feeling anything. That’s the sneaky problem with a shallow point of view. A sneaky POV problem Even when writers think they’re using deep third-person POV, it often isn’t deep enough—and readers can tell. (Sometimes, they even DNF.) In this article, I’m breaking down why this happens and how to fix it. You’ll...

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft My editor brain is full to the brim of ideas. Is this how you feel as a writer sometimes? So many ideas, so little time to bring them into the world! The catalyst for my ideation proliferation is the recent ACES editor’s conference in Salt Lake City. If you’ve ever thought work conferences were boring or stuffy, think again. My Uber driver defaulted to commiseration when I told him why I was in town: “Ah, work conferences suck.” But...

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft I've been more stressed than usual lately... have you felt it, too? This year started in a flurry of activity and it hasn't let up. Among the multitude of reasons to read and write books, escapism remains a valid one. But I'd argue it's more than that. As a writer, you have the power to create alternate realities and propose new norms to your readers. You offer an escape and extend an invitation to envision something new. When life...

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft Have big writing goals this month? Maybe you’re a newbie writer working on your first book and sparring with imposter syndrome in your spare time. Or perhaps you’ve fallen out of a writing habit and need a gentle yet swift kick in the pants to return to your writerly ways. Or maybe you crave a challenge and want to see what you can accomplish in a short amount of time. Enter the idea of NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month),...

A graphic with fuzzy slippers says: Make writing or editing feel cozy.

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft I don’t know about you, but I love my comfort zone. Especially as we slip into autumn here in the Midwest, I want to get cozy. A crisp quilt tucked into my lap. A warm mug of chai in hand. A few extra pillows atop my already overstuffed reading chair. It’s a season of seeking comfort as the leaves around us change, fall quiet, die. The comfort zone invites us to settle in and be present. To exist and enjoy. But stepping out of our...

Curated insights to help fiction writers improve their craft Welcome! I'm so glad you're here ☺️ I made this newsletter for you, after all. It's a space where we can talk all things storytelling at every phase of the writing process. But it's not just any email newsletter; it's an invitation for two-way dialogue. Think of me as your bookworm friend who gets a bit nerdy about writing, reading, and storytelling. So feel free to reply, participate in polls (there's one below), and shoot me a...